I think you have a very nuanced and gentle stroke to your playing. The gradual change in dynamic around 1:10 was exactly what the piece needed to keep your attention and give it that little push into greatness. This really is a nice composition, my only criticism from viewing all the work you have uploaded is that I would like to hear a little more variety. You are clearly very talented, both as a player and as a composer- and I think it could be an interesting exercise for you to attempt something stylistically that you have never tried before- just pick an idea in unfamiliar terrain and run with it. That of course, is just my two cents. This song, and your work as a whole though is great overall- I really enjoy your style and look forward to hearing future compositions.